Posted by: Miss Humphreys | January 30, 2009

Pollution Poem by 6RH

Pollution Poem

By 6RH

 

In the grey air, a foggy, misty haze covers the sky gloomily.

Polluting, toxicating aeroplanes are spinning at high speeds up in the sky.

Colossal, rusty trains pumping pollution rapidly in the tube station.

Dangerous, toxic factories churning slowly producing clouds of gas which run miles long.

Reeking, sickly smelling water oozing stickly into the country side.

Against a wall, foul, dirty waste is thrown carelessly while huge towering turbines turn rapidly on an empty hill.

Lean and scrawny birds slowly starve to a painful death due to their food being poisoned.

The stench river carrying its load and killing innocent fish with its revolting pollutants washes over all in its path.

Dirty, smelly factories working continually turning precious fields into a horrible and awful land.

Greasy, lubricated oil slithers gloomily across the polluted river.

Stinky, gloomy factories work continuously on the barren landscape.

Cloudy, grey smoke floats angrily from tall, metal pipes.

Monstrous, bulky trucks taking the clean air little by little without knowing the consequences.

Dying, dissolving ice caps are sinking slowly into the polluted ocean.

Huge dirty water is flowing soundly everywhere.

Dark, polluted factory waste oozes devilishly into the living river.

Elegant, innocent animals dying horribly and unnecessarily because there habitats are disappearing.

Oily, grey factories splutter smoke from their hearts spoiling the landscape.

Dirty, boiling greenhouse gasses are radically polluting everywhere.

Hazardous, greasy factories, slowly polluting the earth.

 The sky so overcast and grey that it is stained permanently: full of pollution and smoke murdering us and our world,

but when we realise it will be too late!

 

What can you do to help stop pollution?

Responses

This is a totally miserable poem, and is therefore very effective. Well done! it’s stimulating reading!

I think this poem is great, you have become very lyrical…. what music could you read it to?

I love it and i even saved it in my computer…:

I agree with Ms.McPherson it is a very effective poem. :0)

Very effictive writing and WELL DONE!!
The poem is excellent.

I really like the poem and its really really really really good!
bye:) :D :P

:) :D

This is a very affective and truthful poem I think it is great!!!!

very good it inspired me to recycle

I like all the lines!(except mine)
I think it will persuade people to start recycling!(before it’s too late dun dun dun….)

thats a brilliant poem 6rh

Good poem- and i think it will persuade people to save the enviroment!

Hi 6RH cool pollution poem!

Thats a really good poem!!! Do you like my avata?

Cool

It really inspired me aswell

I will definately recycle now!

Miss humphreys + class
Init that is such a great poem!!!! very inspiring!!!! I am obsessed with!!!!’s!!!!
I dont recycle much bottles (I do quite alot!!!!) But i DO recycle alot of paper!!!!

Nataliex

CoOl!
:) :D :P

so wil i

Your blog is great I like it because:
Your poem was discriptive.
Daniels poem had rythme .
The all around the world thing was cool about all the different countrys.
Please could you go on year 3 blog:
It tells you about drafting.
Its linked to your year blog and it will help you.
It has a survey for you to fill in.
It has pictures about felixs origami and nathans nightmare.
Ayan wrote a letter to Gorden Brown

DO YOU WANT TO FIND OUT MORE!
THEN GO ON ARE BLOG NOW!

This poem is very interesting. I enjoyed reading it. The Year 3 are working on how to be more ecofriendly…please check it out!!!

Good poem 6RH

it was great i helped write it HASAN ANWAR

it;s g00d !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! #1

Hi I absolutely love this poem!!!! It is so effective it makes me feel annoyed and sad about pollution. Well Done!!!! :D :) :P
From Nadia/Kawafi

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